Pitch board and Feedback Forms

PITCH BORD AND FEEDBACK FORMS

Above is an image of the pitch board I created to gather feedback of my ideas from various people. 


The content:
Synopsis: Documentary mix with animation of a local night out. Interviewing and analysing the behaviour of drunk teenagers. Getting an insight from inside a night club or bar, possibly having discussions with pub owners or bouncers. The main peg is for the audience to see what teenagers get up to when unleashed off a weekend.


Linked research I showed the programme title images for programmes on channel 4 and BBC 3 that relate to my concept. Channel 4 programme "The Family" and BBC 3 programme "Sun Sex and Suspicious Parents" I wrote a conclusion of what each programme offered on the pitch board to give an aspect of what I wanted to involve in mine. 


Under further links and comments; I added an example of the twist I wanted to involve in my documentary. I done a screen shot of the title sequence for 16 and pregnant to show the drawn animation style I intend on using. Also I put an image of a drawn character on there, in the style of character animations. 
I mentioned clips of teenagers on a night out like they do on a night out in another country but this time it is more local. The only way is essex was also involved, I used this as an example of a reality television popular programme of this current generation, mentioned how at the beginning it was about a group of people living their every day lives, but it did later on turn a bit more scripted and pretentious. 


Target Audience: 16-24, I explained why I put this as the target audience, mainly because they are the ones that would be more interested in a documentary like this.


Feedback Forms: I had overall 13 completed feedback forms...

. 
Questions asked and an average answer:


1. Would you agree to the target audience for this documentary?
every person who filled out my feedback form agreed to the target audience of 16-24 yr olds.


2. Do you believe this works better as a documentary, or creating a film in the eyes of a teenager?
the majority answered that a documentary would be better, in the eyes of a teenager. Its more real if it is a documentary, whereas a film can be fictional.


3. Are you familiar with the programmes I have linked to this as research?
Yes they were.


4. If answered yes, do you think by adding an animation twist would work?
Mixed answers for this question. Some people believed that it would work, and it would make it unique. Some people were worried that if it is not completed properly, it would not look great. Some of the audience made a point of saying that with the animation, it may not be as serious. But then others disagreed and said that a funny side to the documentary.


5. If you were on a night out and you saw someone with a camera, do you reckon you would be willing to participate?
Tricky question, because some people said they would prefer not to. Others said that it depended on how "drunk" they were and someone advised me to be careful with my camera equipment around drunk people!


6. For a final major project, this camera use and the content involved needs to be correct, is there anything you would change or add?
Most answered No. There was a few people that did mention the seriousness of a documentary, and how the animation twist may not work well with it. Some other answers said that it overall was a good concept for a final major project. 


7. Would you watch this documentary?
12 out of 13 participants answered yes, they would watch this. The one that answered no, said it was simply because they are to "shallow" to be interested in a documentary like this, which is fair enough :)


The next stage is changing some pieces of my idea, taking in consideration what people gave me back through the feedback forms...